The Magnificent Marvel In-text citations have MLA errors. Conclusion was too short. Paragraphs did..

The Magnificent Marvel

In-text citations have MLA errors. Conclusion was too short. Paragraphs did not have a clear idea and transitions were not smooth.

I just read over it again and saw some more errors. There is no organized structure to this, I had to read over a few paragraphs more than once because they did not make sense. A few times towards the end the focus was switched. The opening paragraph had no clear thesis. I could not identify the point or what was trying to be said in the last four paragraphs.

I have reviewed the essay, firstly, I’d like to thank you for doing it I really appreciate it, but I’m not too happy about the content. I asked for a comparison of the two companies, which you did to an extent, but I was expecting more statistics; for example which of the two makes more money, or has the most favored characters. In the beginning you just kind of listed Marvel and DC’s main characters. I can go in and fix all these things myself though. About the sources, the in text citations just have page numbers..could you go back and give me the surname of the author of that source to put in with the page numbers? I don’t know where the pages lead. If you could also tell me what information you used from the sources, that would be great, just so I can have a better understanding of how you used them.

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